I really enjoyed it - well done! My only tip would be to break the text up into more paragraphs and maybe put in some sub headings. It's just cos I find a long bit of text hard to read on the computer - don't know if it's just me though
It's a nice story and you told it pretty well. My one suggestion would to break up the one giant paragraph into two or even three smaller paragraphs.
Also, I might have a bit of a tendency to go overboard, but I think the extras (I.E. pictures, videos, polls, links, etc.) add a lot to hubs. They definitely increase your view duration, which helps your ranking.
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