Hello! I just submitted my first hub, and I'd love some critques, and advise on how to make my next one better. Thank You!
I really enjoyed it - well done! My only tip would be to break the text up into more paragraphs and maybe put in some sub headings. It's just cos I find a long bit of text hard to read on the computer - don't know if it's just me though
read it, enjoyed, am now your fan..... just keep keeping on ,would be my advice
You have done really well with your first hub. Well done
It's a nice story and you told it pretty well. My one suggestion would to break up the one giant paragraph into two or even three smaller paragraphs.
Also, I might have a bit of a tendency to go overboard, but I think the extras (I.E. pictures, videos, polls, links, etc.) add a lot to hubs. They definitely increase your view duration, which helps your ranking.
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