feed back please

  1. jlt1971 profile image60
    jlt1971posted 7 years ago

    Hello everyone, I have submitted my second hub, it's very different from the first. I would love some feed back. Thank you

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image81
    Uninvited Writerposted 7 years ago

    It was very good. I would have liked to have seen some pictures though and if you cut the text into several capsules that will look a little better and give you some AdSense ads in the middle, plus I would also add some Amazon and/or Ebay capsules.

  3. jlt1971 profile image60
    jlt1971posted 7 years ago

    Thank you for your feed back, and advice. I'll remember pics for my next hub:-)

 
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