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Critique please :)

  1. Jane@CM profile image61
    Jane@CMposted 7 years ago

    This is my second selling hub - rather out of my comfort zone.  Would love a little critique - not to brutal, I'm middle aged and defenseless (just kidding, I'm young and sexy - oops, kidding again!)

    This is a product I use & have used almost every one of their scents!

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Buy-Philosphy-S … cts-Online

    TIA! jane

  2. Jane@CM profile image61
    Jane@CMposted 7 years ago

    Anyone? sad  Or is it just that bad???

    1. Pearldiver profile image86
      Pearldiverposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      No... It's Not Bad at all Jane.... Just look at the views it has got on Docstore!

      1. Jane@CM profile image61
        Jane@CMposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        You are joking - it's too early for it to be over there!

        1. Pearldiver profile image86
          Pearldiverposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Look at my face.... Could I tell a Lie?

          Your work is ok Jane.

          1. Jane@CM profile image61
            Jane@CMposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            No, you are too adorable to lie smile

 
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