Constructive criticism please

  1. N. Ramius profile image82
    N. Ramiusposted 7 years ago

    Does it look like I'm missing anything in this hub and does it read okay? This hub took quite a bit of research and I want to make sure it reads fluidly. Any suggestions?

    I'm also unsure about the stroke picture I used. It's at the bottom of the hub. I looked online and that seemed like the best picture and I noticed it on a few different sites. I don't know who the origin site is so I just included the link to one that seemed the most promising. Suggestions in terms of copuright?

    1. AEvans profile image72
      AEvansposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Honestly I believe you have done a supberb job on the hub and have clearly mentioned all. You have not infringed any copyrights that I can see great job! smile