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Would you guys be kind if i told i am a newbie

  1. GiselleMartin profile image61
    GiselleMartinposted 7 years ago

    I am new here, and a warm hi to my fellow hubbers. Would love any feedback for my first attempt.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Buying-Guide-for-Baby-Crib

    1. JYOTI KOTHARI profile image75
      JYOTI KOTHARIposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I have just clicked the link and found the hub with "no longer published" status.

      What happened? What's the wrong with that?
      Do you need any help?

      Thanks,
      Jyoti Kothari

      1. GiselleMartin profile image61
        GiselleMartinposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Sorry was reediting and proofreading again, i pasted a para twice. I hope the link works now. *Keeping my fingers crossed this time*

        1. JYOTI KOTHARI profile image75
          JYOTI KOTHARIposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          You can allow your viewers to view the hub while editing. You need not to block them from viewing.
          Please add some videos and some more tags to let search engines find it.

          Thanks,
          Jyoti Kothari

    2. Lady_E profile image82
      Lady_Eposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Nice to have you on HP, Giselle

      Lovely First Hub, very nice layout.
      I've left comments.

      Ps. Made me a bit broody. smile

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      sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Are you a normal girl?

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    Poppa Bluesposted 7 years ago

    Welcome! My days of baby cribs are over, thank god!

    1. GiselleMartin profile image61
      GiselleMartinposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thanx for the welcome, My kid is still through the baby crib phase.

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    Poppa Bluesposted 7 years ago

    Looks like you're off to a great start! It's well written with pertinent information and well arranged links. Good luck!

  4. LViddamoy profile image60
    LViddamoyposted 7 years ago

    Good Hub Giselle,you have a fan here. Never a dull moment with kids.

  5. Rehma Jamshed profile image60
    Rehma Jamshedposted 7 years ago

    Welcome, where is your hub?

  6. GiselleMartin profile image61
    GiselleMartinposted 7 years ago

    Thank you, every day is a learning will surely add some. I need to stick around in forums for some expert advice. Thanks once again.

    1. JYOTI KOTHARI profile image75
      JYOTI KOTHARIposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      You can hook yourself in the forum threads and start commenting on other hubs. Please also join fan clubs and post fan mails to other hubbers' profile. Many of the hubbers will reciprocate.It will generate back links to your profile and increase traffic to your hubs.


      Thanks,
      Jyoti Kothari

      1. JYOTI KOTHARI profile image75
        JYOTI KOTHARIposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Hi Gisell,
        Have you followed some of these tips? What are results?

        Thanks,
        Jyoti Kothari

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    Janettaposted 7 years ago

    Welcome Giselle! The forums are an excellent place to meet new people and learn all the ins and outs of hubbing!! Feel free to ask if you have any questions big_smile

  8. mcbean profile image83
    mcbeanposted 7 years ago

    An excellent first hub.

    The layout is very good.
    Text only first paragraph lets adsense ads sit at the top where they are most effective.
    Good use of photos and Amazon to the right of the text.
    RSS Feed to keep google interested.

    To really get more traction with search engines, you are lacking video. Google loves videos.

    Make sure they contain your key words.

    try this example:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_5FHYRslL0

  9. lrohner profile image84
    lrohnerposted 7 years ago

    Nice job for a first try, but I do have some feedback in addition to Jyoti's. You really have to clean up the grammar, punctuation and spelling errors. That will send a whole lot of people away from your hub pretty darn quick.

    And people usually only purchase one crib in a lifetime and then use that for all of their babies, so most of these folks are new shoppers. I could be wrong, but I doubt that many of them will purchase a crib online. They are going to want to see, touch and feel it. So I would push a lot more accessory products in the hub to give you a better chance of some sales.

  10. aware profile image71
    awareposted 7 years ago

    i hate the term newbie. apprentice .

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      sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I like concubine.

 
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