Constructive Criticism please?
Hi, I'm new here and I'd really appreciate any feedback on this hub I wrote
Thanks!
http://hubpages.com/hub/Ten-Bands-I-Put … ist-I-MakeLissa - as hubs go, a great effort. I thought it was your first but I see you've written several. I'm also assuming it was written for pleasure and not for commercial purposes - despite the Amazon capsules.
As lrohner says, the punctuation is a little messy in the first paragraph but that's it, elsewhere you've nailed it.
Love The Cure by the way, can't fault you there. Well done and welcome to HubPagesThanks for the replies, I just went back and tried to fix up the first paragraph. I think I was so anal about the rest I forgot to edit the first. I noticed I wasn't getting much traffic there and thought I'd see what people thought. Thanks for the help!
Fyi-it was written for pleasure.Thanks everyone so much for the help! Tim, I was actually thinking of doing that, with the Amazon links..I think 4 is the default and I was just checking it out to see how it looked, lol.
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