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  1. Feminestra profile image61
    Feminestraposted 7 years ago

    Ok so I've been working on this hub, adding to it from time to time, but I feel like there is something missing. Feedback?
    http://hubpages.com/hub/Natural-Menopause-Relief

    1. prettydarkhorse profile image63
      prettydarkhorseposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      yes a paragraph is lost or you have put it in another text capsule!

    2. rebekahELLE profile image90
      rebekahELLEposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      something that helps me before I write is I decide exactly what the purpose of the hub is and try to include whatever info I feel is necessary.

      does it say what you want it to say?
      maybe add a few quality links on the subject of natural alternatives
      you want people coming to your article and finding what they searched for.

      it's a 'hot' topic, that's for sure. people search this topic.

  2. rebekahELLE profile image90
    rebekahELLEposted 7 years ago

    It looks fine to me. Perhaps another paragraph underneath the Femineistra paragraph talking about soy or foods that help?

 
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