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  1. Lyria profile image61
    Lyriaposted 6 years ago

    Hi! I've written 4 hubs and would love to get some feedback. Before I post more I'd like to know your thoughts. I know I am a little out of my league here with so many great writers with lots of experience on hubpages and blogs, etc but ya gotta start somewhere! So if you have a chance please check out one or two of my hubs and let me know what you think. How is my writing style? What do you think about my headings and titles? Is the article too broad or too narrow? Any thoughts on improvement? Be critical, I can take it!

  2. TINA V profile image81
    TINA Vposted 6 years ago

    Your hubs are good and informative.  The pictures that you used can attract readers. Perhaps, you can just avoid using "and" in the beginning of a sentence.

    I suggest that you check out darkside and jimmythedock‚Äôs profile.  They have been writing for hubpages for more than 3 years.

    Have a great week!

    1. Lyria profile image61
      Lyriaposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Hi Tina, thanks for the feedback! I have read many of darkside's hubs but none of jimmythedock's yet. I will do that. Thanks again.