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Need some critiques on my new hub.

  1. John Kounoupis profile image60
    John Kounoupisposted 7 years ago

    Hey, just made a new hub about one of my favorite sites, anybody got any tips on how to patch it up so it doesn't look like big globs of text?

    There I Fixed It: Epic Kludges + Jury Rigs

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      John Kounoupisposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Re-edited it a bit, what do you think?

      1. Cagsil profile image60
        Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        I found it to be an interesting read. I left a comment and agreed with the other Hubber(Pearldiver) about it's length. It could use more text.

        Just a thought.

        Welcome to HubPages. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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          John Kounoupisposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Totally agree about the text part. I just tried to present the site, without giving away too many details, so you folks could enjoy it as much as I have. But... I agree.... It could use a lot more text... Thanks for the feedback!

  2. Dame Scribe profile image61
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages, John Kounoupis smile also, focus your tags to target a *industry* like, innovations wink Use the Adwords keyword tool to help with tags and subjects smile just some thoughts and great Hub!

 
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