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my very first hub!

  1. double_frick profile image80
    double_frickposted 7 years ago

    i've never hubbed before, i've never even blogged once before! i barely update my facebook even! in short, this is basically my writing debut, even on a personal level. so be constructive! ;P

    any sage hub advice welcome. smile

    http://hubpages.com/hub/How-coconut-oil … ove-it-too

    1. itech profile image55
      itechposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Welcome to Hub-pageshttp://hubpages.com/x/hub_32.gif & congrats for your first hub.
      http://lsfw.org/moodle/file.php/1/NewJourney1.JPG

  2. Cagsil profile image59
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    Hello,

    I've read your Hub and left a comment. I thought overall it was a pretty good read. I did notice a couple of things as in "I" capitalization at certain spots. You might want to review?

    smile Hope I helped. smile

  3. double_frick profile image80
    double_frickposted 7 years ago

    thanks for the warm welcomes! smile

    and I do have problems capitalizing I, it seems. haha I'll probably type it into word next time.

    and I'll probably go through and beef it up, I mostly just wanted to make sure my writing style is readable enough. as this is my first, I expect improvement.

    1. Cagsil profile image59
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      No problem. I'm glad you see room for improvement, that is one step in the right direction. Again, I look forward to more. smile And, You're welcome. smile

    2. cheaptrick profile image73
      cheaptrickposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      You clearly write for effect,thats great.The tech stuff is not as important as the impact of your Hubs.Be careful not to over edit to the point of bland content.A technically perfect Hub with out good Impact is not worth reading.IMO...

 
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