You have a real knack with words, I like your writing. But I don't understand what you're asking, if these are okay or what should you do? If you're asking for a review, I'd say they're good, but I don't have more than that to offer you. <3
Thank you Sandy.
This is the first time I have put any fiction writing up anywhere. If it is aweful I want to know, or how I can improve it. Thank you for reading it.
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