I have just finished my first short story,really need feedback from an experience writer. Anyone feel like being entertained?
I wouldn't say I'm hugely experienced, but I'd like to read some anyway... is it up on one of your hubs?
You can post a link here in Extreme Hub Makeover. Please provide the link for it?
I am searching for a special person. I have not yet post, portions of the book online.
Also you ask for pity but want criticism, I don't think those two mix. I think you'll find, without asking, Hubbers here are extremely considerate and honest in their feedback. Asking to take pity sets yourself up for the exact opposite. And we do need a link to the work your referring to.
I looked at your Christmas hub. I dont suppose this is the one you want critism about?
Well... for this one...
You need it longer.
A picture or two.
More spacing in the paragraphs.
This is my input.. I am sure you will get there...I am learning still and wouldnt say that I am in a position to tell you anymore, but this is what I have learned, so I hope passing it to you will help. Try not to worry x
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