the previous topic got a bit big and annoying... I tried to write better English... can you guys please spot if it still looks like an article written by a 10 year old?
It looks to me like an article written by an adult, however you need to do another round of proofreading, line by line and slowly. Also, you will need to learn to set commas at the right spot in the early parts of your sentences, these are very important in the English language. Other than that, you're doing fine.
I just finished revising your hub and have sent my editing to your email via HubPages. I hope it helps and feel free to ask me any other questions you may have about spelling or grammar.
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