Yeah I knew I never made it to the contest but I have always wanted to write on this topic and here it is http://hubpages.com/hub/kids-fitness Its about kids fitness. I want YOU to read, review and notify me of how it can be better. ok. Hanging
I only glanced at your hub for a moment but my two cents would be use more capsules. I would create 3 new text capsules with the titles of each being Exercising for Children, Dieting, and Sleep, respectively. Then just paste the corresponding text in each capsule. This would give the eyes a break and make it a quicker read, I think.
"For ways to keep children fit, let's look at this few necessary points:"
Grammatically I think that "this" should be "these". This was just something that popped out at me, not sure why.