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Please help

  1. Rafini profile image85
    Rafiniposted 7 years ago

    I just wrote a hub that concerns me, I am hoping my message gets across.  I can't think of what to say, exactly, but would appreciate any feedback.  I have to logoff, but will check for responses tomorrow morning.  Thanks.


    http://hubpages.com/hub/Real-Strength-Real-Power

    1. Faybe Bay profile image85
      Faybe Bayposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      On my way to read now! I already peaked and it is amazing so far!

    2. Faybe Bay profile image85
      Faybe Bayposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I rated you up and commented. It is very moving.

      1. Rafini profile image85
        Rafiniposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks Faybe.  smile

        I freaked out when i realized what it was all about.  Being that emotionally involved with it I couldn't be objective.

  2. Falsor Wing profile image84
    Falsor Wingposted 7 years ago

    A dictionary definition at some point might help.

    1. Rafini profile image85
      Rafiniposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      smile  I wasn't looking for a definition.  I was wanting to know if my writing confused my message.  check it out and you will see what I mean.

 
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