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My first short story.

  1. samboiam profile image61
    samboiamposted 6 years ago

    I am writing a short story. It is my first attempt at one. I would appreciate any feed back you may have. I also would like to have help with the Amazon ads. I am not sure what type of products to advertise.

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    1. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      You know I think your story is amazing ! big_smile
      About Amazon adds, I would put other mistery/horror/sci fi stories.

  2. Dame Scribe profile image59
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages, Samboiam smile I would suggest children items across the different ages and items for couples. Just some thoughts. I think you're doing a great job, keep up the good work! smile

  3. samboiam profile image61
    samboiamposted 6 years ago

    Thank you both for your input.