Could someone please look at this hub for me.

  1. Super Chef profile image60
    Super Chefposted 6 years ago

    Was wondering if one of the more experienced hubbers on hubpages could maybe take a look at this hub for me http://hubpages.com/hub/Home-Owner-Loan … ime-Buyers I  want to see what they think. I tried to add high paying keywords but dont know if I have over saturated it with them. Regards & Thanks Super Chef

    1. SimeyC profile image89
      SimeyCposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Overall it's pretty good. It's obviously aimed at the British market as we don't tend to get building societies over in the states - and I don't know of any supermarkets selling mortgages over here!

      It reads pretty well so even though you have saturated it with keywords you don't really notice - the only place I noticed was in the intruction with the use of 'home loans' three times in one paragraph.

      One suggestion I might make is to move your Amazon module up.....it's not very prominent and therefore I didn't really notice until I looked for it....

      1. Super Chef profile image60
        Super Chefposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your advice it's really appreciated I will look into the Amazon capsule.

 
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