A story in progress - please voice your opinion

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    Fiction Factoryposted 6 years ago

    A fellow hubber is seeking constructive advice for his hub, a story in progress. I have critiqued it privately, but that is only one opinion. Please help us out by voicing your opinion, thanks!

    http://hubpages.com/hub/An-excerpt-from … ry-project

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    kimberlyslyricsposted 6 years ago

    I think its a good start but would recommend no less than 500 words and you could have your tabs work much better for you

    way to go Wayne

    Just curious why didn't Wayne post this thread himself?

    kimberly

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      Fiction Factoryposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks for your comments, Kimberly, a little more feedback on the substance would be appreciated.

      I saw on his hub that he was hoping for feedback, and took the libety of posting this thread, then leave a comment on his hub to that effect.

 
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