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Need some constructive criticism.

  1. sriparna profile image88
    sriparnaposted 6 years ago

    I have registered with Hubpages 4 weeks ago but been active since last two weeks. I have a plan to join the 30 Hubs in 30 days Challenge in July, so before I start, I would really like the experienced hubbers to go through my hubs (only 6 so far) and give me some feedback. After I accumulate 50 hubs, then I will plan for earnings from Google Adsense. Please comment on how I can improve my hubs. Thanks a lot. I am posting all the six links.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Writing-in-the- … -classroom

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Unique-cooking- … bong-style

    http://hubpages.com/hub/All-you-care-ab … m-cookware

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Kebab-recipes-f … rs-kitchen

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Medical-breakth … ast-decade

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Drink-Tea-and-R … erent-Ways

    1. Polly C profile image87
      Polly Cposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Hi sripana, I read the first hub, I thought it was good. Left you a comment smile

  2. lightning john profile image60
    lightning johnposted 6 years ago

    You may want to think about breaking your words into paragraphs, a little more!  I like your fish recipes though!

    1. sriparna profile image88
      sriparnaposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks Polly, I saw your comments and had replied you.

      Thanks lightning john, I got your point. I'll break the continuous stretch of my writing into paragraphs more frequently, thanks a lot. It's my pleasure that you liked the fish recipes.

  3. Dame Scribe profile image61
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    I read the kebobs and tea smile I think you're doing a fantastic job. Welcome to HubPages big_smile

  4. liljen23 profile image73
    liljen23posted 6 years ago

    I checked out most of your hubs and you are doing great, you have good hubscores as well meaning that you will gain traffic to your hubs. I believe you should write more hubs around the articles you already have to gain more traffic. Keep it up and welcome to the wonderful world of hubbing!!!

  5. SteveoMc profile image91
    SteveoMcposted 6 years ago

    I read unique cooking.  Left a comment.   The hub is well written, informative, is long enough that the reader has confidence to try some of the ideas, and is just about right.  The photos are great and depict what is written about.  I think this hub will do well.
    Good work, and good luck.

  6. Aiden Roberts profile image88
    Aiden Robertsposted 6 years ago

    Hi I am not an expert on hub writing bit yours looked fine to me, informative, well written and well laid out. I agree it would be beneficial to break up the text a little bit but to be honest the lingth of the fish cooking was fine. I love curry but not fish; shame as it looks really nice!

  7. Aiden Roberts profile image88
    Aiden Robertsposted 6 years ago

    Sorry about the spelling mistakes above, still excited about England winning.

  8. IzzyM profile image84
    IzzyMposted 6 years ago

    Did England win? Who were they playing?

    1. Aiden Roberts profile image88
      Aiden Robertsposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Slovenia, Germany next yipeee!

  9. sriparna profile image88
    sriparnaposted 6 years ago

    Liljen, Dame Scribe, Aiden Roberts and SteveoMc: Thanks a tonne for all your inputs, they are valuable to me. I will concentrate on driving more traffic and then finally earning after accumulating some more hubs.

  10. ceciliabeltran profile image86
    ceciliabeltranposted 6 years ago

    good job promoting it!