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Let's talk about sex...

  1. Heather's Passion profile image60
    Heather's Passionposted 6 years ago

    I knew that would get your attention. I'm about to log off for the night after publishing my very first hub. My entire profile is a work in progress, so there are no photos as of yet, but I'd really appreciate some feedback on the writing itself. Thanks in advance.

    Oh, yeah... we really are going to talk about sex in my hub. Here you go: http://hubpages.com/hub/One-Word-FOREPLAY

    1. youcanwin profile image38
      youcanwinposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      male  female

    2. Sullen91 profile image83
      Sullen91posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      The content seems banal. Otherwise, your writing is coherent, but the tone of the hub is irksome because; it sounds like you are a middle-aged sex expert or commentator that could apply to msn.com to fill the role of author for the high traffic, contriving articles that headline the home page (e.g. 101 tips on how to give a good BJ).

      1. Pearldiver profile image89
        Pearldiverposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Your Dark thoughts of 'blow' continue to influence the ability to take you seriously SullenOne. Clearly you bypassed the foreplay of this hub and prematurely moved straight to the BJ sextion. hmm

        1. WryLilt profile image86
          WryLiltposted 6 years ago in reply to this

          *Looks around wildly for the "like" button.*

          1. SomewayOuttaHere profile image59
            SomewayOuttaHereposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            ...i must have read some other hub....LOL!

        2. SteveoMc profile image93
          SteveoMcposted 6 years ago in reply to this

          LOL   I love humor.....pearldiver.   Sextion, hahaha!   Just incredible isn't it?

  2. worldgrandeur profile image65
    worldgrandeurposted 6 years ago

    It was a really nice and informative hub I just read it and enjoyed it as well...

    1. Heather's Passion profile image60
      Heather's Passionposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you smile

  3. WryLilt profile image86
    WryLiltposted 6 years ago

    I hope you're aware that there is a good chance you won't be able to display advertising on the hub since it is probably against google adsense TOS.

    1. Heather's Passion profile image60
      Heather's Passionposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for the warning. I wasn't planning on signing up for Google AdSense, however smile

  4. Daniel Carter profile image91
    Daniel Carterposted 6 years ago

    A bit "short" perhaps. Doesn't seem to quite "cover" it for me.
    But I suppose as a primer it would do for a sex-ed class.

    Nonetheless, welcome.

    1. Heather's Passion profile image60
      Heather's Passionposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for the welcome. I'll agree that it was quite short, my way of testing the waters here... Turns out that the waters didn't quite like my hub, lol!

  5. Heather's Passion profile image60
    Heather's Passionposted 6 years ago

    Thanks for everyone's feedback, but I guess it isn't appropriate. I unpublished it and I will be concentrating on the spirituality aspect of my writing instead since there doesn't seem to be a section for sex. Didn't mean to get into any sort of trouble. Was simply trying to write what I know, haha. Sorry, everybody!

    1. camlo profile image83
      camloposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      There must be something appropriate. There's a Forum for Gender and Relationships, so why not a topic section for such Hubs?

  6. Richieb799 profile image64
    Richieb799posted 6 years ago

    Lets talk about sex baby, lets talk about you and me.. anyone remember that song? LOL

    1. camlo profile image83
      camloposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Yes, I remember ... what was their name? 'Salt'n' Pepper' or something?

    2. camlo profile image83
      camloposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Here it is, by 'Salt N Peppa':
      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzfo4txaQJA

  7. Richieb799 profile image64
    Richieb799posted 6 years ago

    LOL, thats the one, ahh so cheesy lol

 
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