I knew that would get your attention. I'm about to log off for the night after publishing my very first hub. My entire profile is a work in progress, so there are no photos as of yet, but I'd really appreciate some feedback on the writing itself. Thanks in advance.
The content seems banal. Otherwise, your writing is coherent, but the tone of the hub is irksome because; it sounds like you are a middle-aged sex expert or commentator that could apply to msn.com to fill the role of author for the high traffic, contriving articles that headline the home page (e.g. 101 tips on how to give a good BJ).
Thanks for everyone's feedback, but I guess it isn't appropriate. I unpublished it and I will be concentrating on the spirituality aspect of my writing instead since there doesn't seem to be a section for sex. Didn't mean to get into any sort of trouble. Was simply trying to write what I know, haha. Sorry, everybody!
Sick of all this OBL talk!! Let's talk about ME! I'm one away from a personal goal for followers and 73 away from 10,000 views. Help me, you wonderful (and sometimes terrible) people!Of course, then I'll...