Hi, I am relatively new to hubpages, not very computer literate and would appreciate any advice with my profile and 12 hubs.
I am in the process of writing a series of short stories emanating from the nags head pub plus other individual hubs.
My name is Keith by the way
Okay so I just read Nag's Head 2, and I think you can write.
My only suggestions are to maybe add a different picture to each hub, just to add some interest, and I did notice a couple of punctuation problems. Not bad, really, but one was a quotation mark, so that's why I mention it. You may want to group it with what I am guessing was Nag's Head 1. Maybe you did that. I didn't really look.
I don't think you'll make any money off of this kind of stuff on the web. Which is perfectly okay, just mentioning it. Good writing though, and you can still gain a following.
Welcome to HubPages, I think you'll like it here!
Your writing is excellent, as PB noted. Check out your tea hub--your comments capsule got moved ahead of the hub. I thought your hub was empty!
The school of life?
I really liked it . good poem and good subject. I truly enjoyed it.
I would add a pic so all your hubs do not show your avatar on your profile page.
I read the Nags Head Pub.
Excellent writing. It was clear, delightful, and enjoyable. The twist at the end was great, although I would have loved to see him face his bar friends.
It kept me reading from start to finish. That in itself is a major accomplishment.
Good work. I choose to follow you and will read more.
The writing is excellent! The stories and poetry are entertaining and even educational. I have learnt some more English slang.
I agree some different photos on the hubs would be good though! Well done!
Thank you all for helping me with my new hubs. I am loving it here already. What a nice bunch of talented people you are.
I have started to make the suggested changes, and take on board that these short stories are not going to make money.
With a response like this I'm sure I will love writing here!
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