I have built my 1st lens about eyeglasses lenses. I know it needs much more love, and I hope I can get some suggestions from you. Thank you so much!
Wish you all a happy day!
You need to post this in "extreme hub makeover" forum , where it is permissible to post a link to your hub
Oh, and, This is not the squid thing-- no lenses - we have Hubs here.
Good luck and welcome!
Thank you! Sorry about the squid thing. Hah. I will take your suggestion, and post it again in the "extreme hub makeover" forum. Look forward to your visit again!
wait, isn't this the "extreme hub makeover" forum? Wow, I am a little confused. I guess I need spend more time being familiar with the whole forum. Anyway, thanks.
Welcome to HP.
You've picked a topic that appeals to me. I love all kinds of fashion spectacles and sunglasses.
Nothing wrong with your writing style here. I didn't notice any glaring grammatical errors or misspellings.
However, you picked the title "Eyeglasses Lenses", and that is just too general. It doesn't describe what follows. In the first part of your hub, you launched into a description of the various colors of lenses for sunglasses.
Decide what you're going to write about, and be more targeted. If you really want to focus on sunglasses, for instance, I'd like to see a title like "How to Select the Best Sunglasses for Your Needs" or "Your Best Choice for Sunglasses."
You could also bring in the mention of Transitions, as some people wear those, when they don't want to spend the money on a separate pair of sunglasses.
Also, I'd like to see you expand a little more on why the need for sunglasses in the first place (for instance, they help prevent cataracts). Another thing, are prescription sunglasses right for some people, and if so, why? Can progressives be made into sunglasses, and what to watch for, etc. etc.
How to care for glasses is always a good idea on any hub about this subject. People need to know this valuable info, and you could have provided even more information than you did.
If you're going to write about sunglasses, I want to see a fuller hub that offers a unique perspective. It's a popular subject, and you are up against a tremendous amount of competition on the Internet for readership.
I really appreciate your suggestions! Thanks so much for taking time to offer me so many ideas, and it is really helpful for me. It is the first time I write a hub, and lots of things I haven't noticed. You've helped me a lot, really. I am going to take your advice and spend some time thinking about the content of this hub. It will probably take some time, but I like to share useful information with people. Please wait in patience and look forward to your visit and precious suggestions again. So nice of you!
Yeah, normally this kind of query goes into "Extreme Hub Makeover". I answered your question before I even noticed anything about the category. Good luck with hub development, and glad I could be of help.
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