I've just published these two hubs
http://hubpages.com/hub/Squinkies-Buy-S … oys-Online
http://hubpages.com/hub/Zoobles-Buy-Zoo … tat-Online
Would love a critique. While I have written at hubpages under another id, I am starting out fresh with this id. I feel like I have improved since I started out with the other id, but I know my hubs could use some help.
I just read the squinkies hub. It looks fine to me. I will never buy a squinky. But if I decided I would, this would have given me a sense of urgency to act now or be locked out in the cold. Well done.!
I red the Zoobles one. Seems like it ought to make money if those toys get popular. Good luck.
I've never heard of either one, but you've got 2 very well put together hubs.
On the both hubs, I see a horizontal bar of AdSense ads, a horizontal row of Amazon ads and then another horizontal row of AdSense ads. On my monitor, I don't even see any of your text, so I know that I'd be outta there quickly before reading anything you wrote. Maybe you can turn AdSense down from high to medium or low?
I would also add a little blurb like you did on the Zoobles hub about what Squinkies are, just in case someone hasn't heard of them but migrates there from your other hubs.
lrohner - yeah, I know you don't see any text. I am not sure how well this layout will convert. I have seen other hubs using it and thought that this one might be a good one to try it on. Simply because I think that most people who will be searching for these products will be looking to buy them, not so much read about them.
I added the Squinkies blurb to the Zoobles hub. Thanks for the heads up
I wonder if anyone has any experience using a layout like this with the 2 amazon modules at the top?
DB Cooper - thanks for the feedback!
Shadesbreath - awesome, that is what I'm working for
Steveomc - good to hear
My only complaint was the same as Irohners - too many ads at the top.
I thought it really well written, though - you did a good job of advertising.
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