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Are my topics and content beneficial?

  1. dilshanh profile image80
    dilshanhposted 6 years ago

    I am a new hubber (just few weeks ago) and discovered this wonderful forum just today. It motivates to have constructive criticism. Please let me know your feedback.

    1. shazwellyn profile image84
      shazwellynposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Welcome to hubpages.  Is there any particular hub you want us to look at?

      1. dilshanh profile image80
        dilshanhposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Here is just one of it
        http://hubpages.com/hub/Say-No-to-your-boss

        Here is another one too
        http://hubpages.com/hub/The-power-of-WH … reneurship
        would appreciate if you could comment on that too

        1. dosters profile image88
          dostersposted 6 years ago in reply to this

          WHEN TO SAY "NO" TO YOUR BOSS
          1) no need to caps lock the title.  Yelling doesn't make Google hear you any better smile
          2)Revise: in 1st paragraph: " it turns a havoc" not correct use of havoc, no period after madam, as you already have an ex pt;
          in para 2 "especially if you are a new employee striving to put yourself abreast of the competition you face from your colleagues"-this is not what abreast means, no space in between words and slash (also in para 4,5, &6);
          para 3 "the credits you earned is ultimately drowned and not recognized" Is->are;
          para 6 "yours and others" need apostrophes
          para 7 period or semicolon after "IT"

          Great topic.

          1. dilshanh profile image80
            dilshanhposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            Thanks for correcting me. I will do the changes right away.

            Its just my personal preference to put the topics on CAPS, not with any motive of SEO

            Great feedback.

            Thanks again

  2. ponx profile image89
    ponxposted 6 years ago

    Content and layout is good. Maybe just to make it a little more attractive try to add some relevant pictures/videos.

    Welcome to HP! smile

    1. dilshanh profile image80
      dilshanhposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks for your feedback.

      Videos are a good idea, I will try to add them in due course.

      I do not have my own pics. Borrowed pics usually has the copyright issues.

  3. Brupie profile image85
    Brupieposted 6 years ago

    Your hub could benefit from one or more concrete examples, fictional or otherwise.  An anecdote can liven up a general topic like this, make your point better and leave a lasting impression.

 
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