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    archbishop1posted 5 years ago … loper-Jobs

    I was wondering if some folks would mind giving me some feedback so that I can see where I am deficient at in regards to Hub creation.

    Thank you in advance, and feel free to e-slap me down.

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    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages!

    Your hub seems to be good. I would break your paragraphs into smaller portions. Your average online reader has a short attention span. Bulk paragraphs will(or might) drive them off your hub, sooner than you like.

    Marisa Wright, Relache, Sunforged and many others have hubs about how to "write" or "tips" on how to improve hubs.

    The question remains as to your reason for being on HubPages- (a) write to write or (b) write to earn?

    Marisa Wright wrote:

    Relache wrote:

    Sunforged wrote: … nt-revenue

    All worthy of reading. I do hope you enjoy your time here. smile

    I hope that helped. smile

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      archbishop1posted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Very insightful. Thank you very much. That was just what I need to hear and be directed to read.