In the last 3 months I have lot of advice from our community. I published this hub after considering advice from everyone. Thanks to all.
Please check this hub and let me know pros and cons of it.
In my opinion, the hub does not express the rewards or importance of adopting US children versus adopting from other countries. Also, you've made references to adopting from certain states but did not give a valid reason why you made the reference to these states. You wrote it as if its different to adopt from Florida, Georgia, SC, and NC, but then followed it up with a statement like "or, any other place in the US" so therefore if it is the same to adopt in any state in the US, there was no need to single these states out.
Same feedback as awesomeactress... Not enough content. There's very little on the why, how, who, or what.
Also the picture was borrowed from GettyImages without attribution.
One minor thing I would change is using "children" instead of "kids." "Adopting children" sounds so much better than "adopting kids." Also, I know you're trying to optimize your hub for searches, but it sounds bad to repeat the same phrase over and over.
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