I think beyond the standard writing-class stuff of good character, desire, conflict, change, etc., what really has to happen is the writing must be good. Not just grammatical and proofread, but truly good, with style. It must be marvelous to read. I think of lines from Shakespeare all the time and am like, GAWD, that is sooooooo good. An example from Hamlet is the lines:
Thrift, thrift, Horatio, the funeral bak'd-meats Did coldly furnish forth the marriage tables.
I mean, he could have just written, "Wow, they got married really soon after the funeral." That would have served just as well to convey the point, right?
When someone can tell a story WELL, selecting details to share in such a way, the experience of reading becomes one of immersion. It's not just a story, it's an adventure in language and cleverness and character and poetics and puzzles and just lots of things. (Which is why people still read Shakespeare despite how "hard" it is.)
Any story which engages the reader in some way. We must be able to identify with the protaganist, we must be able to become part of his life. Even an antagonist must, in some way, draw us in. We must feel sorry for him or want to help him or even hate him. Above all, what makes a good story is honest writing. By that I mean that the writer cannot withhold information, cannot change tack in the middle of the story. We, the reader, must feel we've been dealt fairly. Don't confuse this with twisting plot. It's more about keeping the story true to its genre down to the smallest detail.
A really great story comes only when the fictional characters are more real, more personable and, more believable than a live person. The character doesn't of necessity have to be a likable one, simply a truly believable one. Of course, plot development and reader involvement are essential to the successful telling of any tale. Scenes, dialogue and interactions are of no less value in conveying the story, but, to be written truly greatly the prose must paint a picture to "show" the reader what's taking place instead of simply "telling" them.
Another thing I might add is that it has to be something that makes you feel: angry, tense, excited, devastated, etc. The story has to pull you in and engage you in a way that makes you care what happens because it feels like it's happening to you, and not just some random character in the story.
Yeah, I love those stories that pull you in and make you lose track of time. The great ones are the ones that have you so embedded within them that when you are disturbed in real life, you're actually jarred and have to consciously remember that the world you were just in was all imaginary.
It really works. You can highlight any text, press a shortcut combination, and it will read the text out loud. Or you can ask it to create wave/mp3 files - it can record an entire novel in about 1 hour. The best part is that the voices are synthesized human voices, so natural-sounding that it is virtually impossible to tell it is not a real person speaking.
The basic software is called TextAloud, available from nextup.com. You then need to pick one or more voices, available from different providers. I use British Daniel as the default voice, my favorite by far, it is from RealSpeak. I also use some voices from AT&T. Samples are available on the site.
I think its a great idea if the writer wrote a story in which a writer is reading his own story and the story actually happens the way he's reading it, but not like a narrative, like he's an actual character.
and I was referring to the people above you who were posting their ad about that voice writing from AT&T stuff - in case you didn't see that - wow, I admit, I didn't entirely puke, just really felt like it.
Thanks to everyone for your thoughts. For me, it's mainly about the characters being believable and interesting. I also enjoy being surprised by the ending but really being involved with the story is the winner.
JK Rowling does a great job of making the reader feel that they are actually a part of the story. That is why so many have read her books. When you are drawn in and are mentally living the story, you can't put it down because you want to see what happens next. Harlan Ellison was very good at this as well. However his writing would at times hit you like a 2x4 up side the head.
newspapers - they make a great story now and then. And when you're done with them, they're great for starting fires, mulching the flower/veggie garden/allotment and wiping up the vomit you _______s with your AT&T ad just made me puke up all over the floor!
p.s. do you get PAID for doing that? and can I join the "paid club"? Or would you rather to remain clueless, innocent and irritating?
I have no financial interest whatsoever in those companies and am not affiliated with them. I am a licensed and registered user who has paid full price for the software. Your allegations are absurd. I genuinely think this is a useful program, and am entitled to share my experiences. As for company names, I was being asked a direct question by Couturepopcafe and gave a direct reply.
You are being exceptionally rude. Knowing your forum posting style, I will not respond to any further posts from you.
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