Check my hub a let me know my mistakes

  1. daniel steve profile image59
    daniel steveposted 5 years ago

    I have two hubs published and i am a new hubber. Please let me know whether i have written my hub well or still to improve etc

    1. Valeed profile image81
      Valeedposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Hi! Welcome tou Hubages smile
      I just read both of your hubs. Both hubs were good writen with good use of capsules and contained short paragraphs. It seems you are of to a good start. I persume you have already read hubs related to improving the hubs, if you have not then I recommend you to do so.
      The hub on breast cancer symptoms however lacked on content. You can add more content to it and try to do a better keyword research next time.
      Keyword research is the key to success.
      Wish you luck for your future hubs. smile

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      WildIrisposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I read your Hub on Testicular Cancer Symptoms--a very important topic. Clearly you've done your research. I like the layout of this Hub, the use of bold lettering, bullets, the placement of the Amazon capsule,and illustrations.

      I am not certain English is you native language, but there are sections that are informative yet awkward. The paragraph starting with, "What are the risk factors..." could be proofread to flow more smoothly for the reader.

      Congratulations! You're off to a terrific start on HubPages.