I joined Hubpages a few weeks ago but haven't published a hub until now. If any of you wouldn't mind taking a quick glance at it and giving me any suggestions it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
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Hey HauserQ - welcome to HubPages
Your hub is, by and large - fine. It's a great first effort and what it lacks is you to go back and review/edit. You've got a few grammar/spelling mistakes that interrupt the flow of the text.
You could do with 'best nerf guns' being inserted into the text a few more times. 'this is why it's one of the best nerf guns' - 'this is one of the best nerf guns because ... ' kind of thing.
Don't go nuts though - a few naturally occurring repetitions of your keyword will suffice. Tags - you could choose better ones. Use one's that directly relate to your keyword - rather than generics that don't fit with the keyword - such as 'kids toys'.
buy a nerf gun, buy nerf, buy nerf guns, buy nerf guns online, best nerf guns to buy, best nerf gun, cheap nerf guns, cheapest nerf gun, cool nerf guns - etc.
And add something to your profile. Nothing too explanatory - just who you are, that you review products or some such. Makes you more user friendly.
Hope that helps
Thanks chemicalengineeri for the tip and thank you frogdropping for the thorough critiquing! I really appreciate it and made changes based on your suggestions.
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