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Any comments and advice on my first two hubs?

  1. Chaya Parmessur profile image80
    Chaya Parmessurposted 5 years ago

    It took me a long time (15 months) to find time and inspiration to start writing my hub pages.
    Finally I took the plunge and I am having fun.  I would like some advice from more experienced hubbers.

    I have travelled a lot in my life and have always kept a travel journal, which can be used to write a series of travel adventures, but with also useful information for others.  I would still like to keep in the personal experience.  I know my first two hubs need some more information on what others should do to go on a similar trip.  Is this what experienced hubbers would advise?

    Really look forward to as much constructive criticism as possible.

    Sincerely appreciate all your help.

    1. Brinafr3sh profile image88
      Brinafr3shposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Be consistent. Use interesting content.

  2. smalika profile image59
    smalikaposted 5 years ago

    I have read the following hub

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Volunteering-in-Remote-India

    I think you've had an interesting experience and it was very well narrated; try to add more content. A bit more about the conditions in which the classrooms were and the place you have been staying etc. and more on the surroundings could have made this hub even better.

    1. Chaya Parmessur profile image80
      Chaya Parmessurposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks smalika for useful advice.  I have had a bit more time to do my third hub page

      http://hubpages.com/hub/Cycling-through … nd-Vietnam

      I have put much more detail in this one...but there is still room for improvement.

  3. smalika profile image59
    smalikaposted 5 years ago

    I also read this one

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Spiritual-inwar … -from-home

    Again a captivating experience, again it leaves the reader rather longing to know; like I would have loved to know where you stayed, how the people coped and their standard of living. Try to be detailed,, I think it wont take a lot of time as you have been there and seen it, not much researching involved.

 
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