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Critique my hub please

  1. speedbird profile image64
    speedbirdposted 5 years ago

    I would like somebody to critique my hub positively or negatively, any suggestions will be highly appreciated. Thanks in advance.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Month-of-Fe … llustrated

    1. Hindol Adhya profile image60
      Hindol Adhyaposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      It's nicely formatted with video capsules, amazon capsules. I very much liked the layout of the article. But read this if you are targetting AdSense. The early you learn these tricks the better.

      http://hubpages.com/hub/How-To-SEO-On-Page-Optimization

      By shazwellyn

    2. kschang profile image89
      kschangposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Not bad, but a few problems

      1) It's NOT illustrated. There are only 3 videos, not that much relevance to the topics mentioned.

      2) Minor formating problems here and there

      3) I personally think the Amazon capsule's too long, and not really related to the hub

      4) Is there a PURPOSE to this hub, other than collection of trivia?

      1. speedbird profile image64
        speedbirdposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your comments, I will really check on your suggestions
        smile

 
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