Your hub looks fine but I'd be a bit wary about showing that first photo of the baby with the bottle! It's funny, but remember people from all over the world may see your hub and a lot of them can't read English, so they'd miss the disclaimer.
The other thing is you have a lot of white spaces which you'll want to get rid of.
They're created through a space at the bottom of the text capsules and so are easy to get rid off.
Apart from that I think you have written an excellent and really useful hub.
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Wrong forum, this forum is for the purpose of linking to a new hub you have written so that others can read it and offer constructive criticism as to layout, content, spelling etc. I think there is a parenting and baby forum on here if you look for it though.
General tip though, try pure (the 'pure' part is very important) essential lavender oil on your babies clothes, pillow, forehead etc to give them a safe natural sleep with only a non-dangerous herbal method. Works a treat.
I don't think you understand how to use this forum. I checked your profile and saw this was the name of your first hub.
You need to include the link here so people know to check it out.
I think we were under the impression you were actually asking us how to help you with your baby!
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