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  1. btom profile image68
    btomposted 6 years ago

    Hi,
    I joined a week ago and posted three hubs.
    http://hubpages.com/profile/btom
    I mostly spent time reading what others do.
    Can you please advise me if I'm on track, and if you think I'm using the Amazon ads properly and at the best place?
    Thank you!

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      Precious Williamsposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Hi btom.

      Welcome to Hubpages.  I joined sometime ago, but I haven't written much recently - so there will be other people who can advise you better.  I have just read two of your hubs - pigs bedding and the IPad one.  You write clearly and with knowledge.  My only comment would be is that I think you need to add pictures.  The guinea pig one would just capture people's attention.  I think this is what most people would say.  Enjoy your writing.

    2. Cagsil profile image60
      Cagsilposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      I've reviewed your hubs-

      http://hubpages.com/hub/Does-the-Pimsle … eally-Work

      (a) Not enough content. This hub could be flagged for substandard article. Articles should be 400 words or longer.
      (b) Since there isn't enough content in this hub, then you've not run into the a common problem many new members have, such as using more than one text capsule, to open up more ad spaces.
      (c) Keywords/tags- You don't have enough of them. On articles up to 1500 words, you can use 9-15 keywords/tags and on articles over 1500 words, you can use up to 40 keywords/tags.

      http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Freedom-i-C … d-and-iPod

      The above hub has the same problem as the previous hub.

      http://hubpages.com/hub/Choosing-the-Ri … ge-Bedding

      The above hub has the same problem as the previous two hubs.

      I hope that helps.

  2. btom profile image68
    btomposted 6 years ago

    Thank you for your helpful comments, I will make some changes soon.

 
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