please comment also on my other hubs, thanks
I will appreciate any suggestions, mainly on the photos am I using too much photos?
Looks good, that one. I like the way you used photos to illustrate each product.
You really need to spend more time on your hubs. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes and the writing is just plain bad. Sorry to be so blunt, but it looks like you wrote that in 10 minutes.
The only real suggestion I might make is to write an introduction capsule. Right now the first photo is taking the prime ad space at the top right of the hub.
Adding an intro capsule (that is long enough) will move that first ad into the right of the first capsule.
I'll think of a good introduction while adding more content to my article. THANKS!!
With this particular hub there are certain things that are missing like proper capitalization right at the beginning. But the thing that struck me most was the herky jerky rhythm to the hub.
What the heck is she talking about? I'm glad you asked, lol. No seriously, it is almost like you want to be all technical at times and then it falls to a more familiar personal tone and that jerks the reader around a bit. Of course this is just my 2 cents worth.
Welcome to hubpages! Keep writing and working on the hubs!
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