I'm looking for help with my latest hub, inspired by hubpages forum posters. Firstly, I wasn't really sure what to title it or what tags to use. Secondly and most importantly, I'd like a critique of the content. Is there more information you'd like to see, better organization, etc.
http://hubpages.com/hub/Why-Conspiracy- … er-Go-Away
Thanks for your help!
I enjoyed reading the hub. There is one sentence you might look at though.
"This is many Republicans watch Bill O'Reilly and the readers of the HuffingtonPost are almost exclusively Liberal.
Thanks, I added the "why" to fix it. I swear I read that sentence at least five times before publishing. It's amazing how many obvious mistakes when proofreading your own work.
Very interesting and clear. I do recommend that you do another round of proofreading. Here is what I found in the first half or so of the article - my suggestions in parenthesis:
Capitalization: Youtube (YouTube)
Past/present tense: seemed to be (seem to be)
Grammar: reason... is due to the way (reason... is the manner in which...)
Clarity: makes them much easier (makes myths much easier)
Grammar: the time day (the time of day)
Punctuation: opponents and you (opponents, and you
Punctuation: and instead, (and, instead,)
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