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Please Help Me With My Latest Hub

  1. Maembe profile image60
    Maembeposted 5 years ago

    Hi all,
    I'm looking for help with my latest hub, inspired by hubpages forum posters.  Firstly, I wasn't really sure what to title it or what tags to use.  Secondly and most importantly, I'd like a critique of the content.  Is there more information you'd like to see, better organization, etc.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Why-Conspiracy- … er-Go-Away

    Thanks for your help!

  2. Michael Willis profile image76
    Michael Willisposted 5 years ago

    I enjoyed reading the hub. There is one sentence you might look at though.
    "This is many Republicans watch Bill O'Reilly and the readers of the HuffingtonPost are almost exclusively Liberal.

    1. Maembe profile image60
      Maembeposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks, I added the "why" to fix it.  I swear I read that sentence at least five times before publishing.  It's amazing how many obvious mistakes when proofreading your own work.

      1. Michael Willis profile image76
        Michael Willisposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        I have done the same thing over and over again.

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    Website Examinerposted 5 years ago

    Very interesting and clear. I do recommend that you do another round of proofreading. Here is what I found in the first half or so of the article - my suggestions in parenthesis:

    Capitalization: Youtube (YouTube)
    Past/present tense: seemed to be (seem to be)
    Grammar: reason... is due to the way (reason... is the manner in which...)
    Clarity:  makes them much easier (makes myths much easier)
    Grammar: the time day (the time of day)
    Punctuation: opponents and you (opponents, and you
    Punctuation: and instead, (and, instead,)

    1. Maembe profile image60
      Maembeposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks.  I can't believe I missed a couple of those.

 
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