My first BIG Hub - Any Suggestions?

  1. mrizos profile image76
    mrizosposted 8 years ago

    This is the first BIG (and real) hub that I've created.  I just started using hubpages not too long and so far everything's been great.

    I'm just wondering if this hub is too long, too cluttered or too....

    Well, you get the idea.



  2. Marye Audet profile image91
    Marye Audetposted 8 years ago

    It is a very informative hub...

    You have some basic errors in grammar.  Copy it and run the text through a word processing program so you can catch the errors and spelling mistakes.

    I think that you should consider breaking the hub up into 2 or 3 smaller hubs. Consider it a hub micro-environment. smile  That way people like me are less likely to be overwhelmed by all of the information.  It is somewhat like taking a sip of water from an open fire hydrant.

    All in all I think it is very good.

  3. mrizos profile image76
    mrizosposted 8 years ago

    Great, thanks for the suggestions!  Yeah, I just finished it today and I forgot to do the whole grammar check thing.