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How Can I Improve These 2 Hubs?

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    B A N K A I guyposted 5 years ago

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Call-of-Duty-7- … s-HQ-Guide and http://hubpages.com/hub/Unpaid-Internsh … y-worth-it

    These two hubs are the two I feel need some improving yet I can not  think how!

    Please reply with some help

    Thanks in Advance,
        B A N K A I guy

    1. kschang profile image91
      kschangposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Checked the Internship one.

      1) Too short
      2) Not enough points made. You didn't list the pros and cons, not analyze them. You just say "there is no immediate financial gain" and left it at that.
      3) You have a conclusion, but you provided very little evidence to supprot your conclusion.

  2. Cagsil profile image84
    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    The first hub needs work. Changing the format would be better. the poll in the beginning looks bad. Too many keywords, which might get you flagged for excessive keywords.

    The second hub is way too short in content, so adding content would be better. Expand on what you're already talking about. There are not enough keywords on this hub.

    Visit the Learning Center to get a better idea of "What is a Hub"?


  3. jdavis88 profile image88
    jdavis88posted 5 years ago

    1, make the first hub easier to read and understand

    2, add some video to each of the hubs

    3, add some more length, probably another 100-200 words, to the second hub

  4. psycheskinner profile image81
    psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

    1) Google images is not a source, it is a search engine. Otherwise... not a subject I know much about.
    2) Not sure I follow the logic that unpaid is somehow better than paid.