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Xtreme Hub Makeover Help needed

  1. MABledsoe profile image54
    MABledsoeposted 8 years ago

    I need urgent help for two hubs.  Their titles are Ugly Grandchildren Would You Disown Them and Why is Death So Taboo.  The highest viewing is 13.  Please make some suggestions.  I'm all ears and eyes. Thank You.

    Sincerely,

    MABledsoe

    1. Ryan Hupfer profile image68
      Ryan Hupferposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Hey MABledsoe,

      Could you please post the links to these Hubs?

      Thanks!

    2. Ryan Hupfer profile image68
      Ryan Hupferposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Hey MABledsoe,

      I have to agree with the rest of the suggestions here - the Hubs are super short and should be expanded a bit if you expect to get any type of search-friendly readership with them.

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image82
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    To me, the main problem is that they are too short.

    1. dishyum profile image55
      dishyumposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      big_smile

    2. GoldenThread profile image60
      GoldenThreadposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Bingo. I checked out both and they are very short.

  3. Shirley Anderson profile image83
    Shirley Andersonposted 8 years ago

    Definitely too short.  Reads like you wrote the opening and then stopped.

    Too bad, I was getting into the ugly grandchildren story.

  4. Marye Audet profile image89
    Marye Audetposted 8 years ago

    Too short, the article stops abruptly.
    Also, neither of those articles is likely to be heavily searched on google so the traffic will always  be lower.

    Wordtracker doesn't show many  searches for Grandchildren, and the best one is "grandparents raising grandchildren"
    if you could work your article into type of angle that it would do better.
    Good luck.

 
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