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Need your criticism

  1. SunSeven profile image63
    SunSevenposted 5 years ago

    This is my very first sandpit post. The link below says it all. Can you make an (real) attempt at least?.


    http://hubpages.com/hub/Top-10-Dumb-Ama … er-Reviews

    Best Regards

    1. kschang profile image89
      kschangposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Very interesting, as I have a hubs like that myself. However, two notes of warning.

      1) The comments are content of Amazon and they may not be so kindly for you to cite them for your own use. I agree they add to the humor value, but you may want to check on what is the Amazon policy on outside use of comments posted on Amazon.com

      2) I personally dislike the "beg for ratings" picture at the very end. smile That's a personal opinion.

      1. SunSeven profile image63
        SunSevenposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you very much for your input.


        1. I dont think even microsoft or google will or can raise copyright issues on screenshots. May be I am wrong. Lets see, anyway. smile

        2. I respect your dislike, complied accordingly. smile

        Thanks once again.

        Best Regards

  2. wilderness profile image96
    wildernessposted 5 years ago

    How did you ever find these things??  A really funny hub I enjoyed.

    About the only criticism I have is the embedded links; they don't always seem applicable or relevant to the hub.  How are Amazing India facts and pictures relevant to dumb Amazon reviews?  You may find HP unpublishing, I don't know.  And why link to your hub from within the same hub?

    Other than the links, I thought you did a great job.

    1. SunSeven profile image63
      SunSevenposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you wilderness for your suggestions. I have changed the links smile

      Linking the same hub is a sort of defence, for if someone decides to copy the whole of it, I may have a link back to my original hub. smile

      Best Regards

      1. wilderness profile image96
        wildernessposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Now that's a thought that had never occurred to me.  I'll have to remember this one! smile

        1. SunSeven profile image63
          SunSevenposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          And dont forget to use your referrel link on this one! smile

          1. wilderness profile image96
            wildernessposted 5 years ago in reply to this

            Covering ALL the bases are you?  lol  Maybe, just maybe, this attitude is the kind of thing that has made you so successful and respected here.

  3. Mark Ewbie profile image84
    Mark Ewbieposted 5 years ago

    I didn't notice the merchandising at all.  Just enjoyed the hub - funny and fun.  Sorry, not much of a critique.

    1. SunSeven profile image63
      SunSevenposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      So, its you. Now I know why I am not getting rich at HP.

      Dont you know Mark, its illegal not to notice and buy my merchadise when you visit my hubs? New rules. smile

      Warm Regards and thank you so much.

  4. Rochelle Frank profile image89
    Rochelle Frankposted 5 years ago

    Just read and posted a comment. These are priceless.

    1. SunSeven profile image63
      SunSevenposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I am so glad that you visited my hub Rochelle. It feels like old times, when, we as friendly strangers and HP was a warm site, were open to each other.

      Warm Regards

 
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