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    alwaysmileposted 5 years ago

    Hello All!

    I am new to Hub Page and have posted my first article - would appreciate feedback so I can stay consistent and provide high quality articles. Thank You!

    1. Uninvited Writer profile image82
      Uninvited Writerposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      It's far too short.

      You don't have any instruction on how to bake the cupcakes other than saying to follow the box...what box? How much chocolate?

      A proper recipe needs to have an ingredients list before the instructions.

      You need to really spell it out when you are writing recipes.

  2. LuisEGonzalez profile image80
    LuisEGonzalezposted 5 years ago

    Not bad and recipes tend to do good at Hubpages, if I may make a suggestion, try to present the recipes in a clearer way, I kind of got lost trying to follow it.