I had published this hub early on. I did a little revision and want help, advice, and expertise on how to make it better. http://hubpages.com/hub/8-danger-signs- … lationship
Hi, I'm new too, but i went and looked at your hub. Your subject is very daring and necessary. I would include a few links as resources if someone finds themselves in this type of relationship. I also noticed some grammatical errors. I'll list them for you:
you will actually being doing : "being" should read "be"
probably no ready to date. "no" should read "not"
those who has a right "has" should read have
I hope this was helpful!
I think it is a little narrow to say you shouldn't date someone not considering marriage. Not everyone has marriage as a life goal.
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