Critique on a hub

  1. aw1219 profile image59
    aw1219posted 5 years ago

    I had published this hub early on.  I did a little revision and want help, advice, and expertise on how to make it better. … lationship

    1. frugalfamily profile image80
      frugalfamilyposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Hi, I'm new too, but i went and looked at your hub.  Your subject is very daring and necessary.  I would include a few links as resources if someone finds themselves in this type of relationship.  I also noticed some grammatical errors. I'll list them for you:
      you will actually being doing : "being" should read "be"
      probably no ready to date. "no" should read "not"
      those who has a right          "has" should read have
      I hope this was helpful!

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

    I think it is a little narrow to say you shouldn't date someone not considering marriage.  Not everyone has marriage as a life goal.