Some Important Steps for New Inventors

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    I'mjustsayingposted 6 years ago

    Hello,
    I'm new here and I just wanted to get some feedback on a topic I posted.

    Thank you in advance!

    1. R.S. Hutchinson profile image87
      R.S. Hutchinsonposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Well…  a few things:

      Quite a few typo's, grammar issues, and vernacular problems.

      Also you started a numbered bullet list of questions…  but I believe the bullet list should have stopped after #3 (maybe #4). So I'm guessing that was an oversight.

      A few suggestions would be to use some bold type throughout.. personally I just think it helps break up the monotony of an article.

      Also add some pictures, and some more tags.

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        I'mjustsayingposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks!

 
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