I'm new here and I just wanted to get some feedback on a topic I posted.
Thank you in advance!
Well… a few things:
Quite a few typo's, grammar issues, and vernacular problems.
Also you started a numbered bullet list of questions… but I believe the bullet list should have stopped after #3 (maybe #4). So I'm guessing that was an oversight.
A few suggestions would be to use some bold type throughout.. personally I just think it helps break up the monotony of an article.
Also add some pictures, and some more tags.
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