Contructive Criticism anyone?

  1. mydniterose profile image61
    mydniteroseposted 5 years ago

    I am new to hubpages and still trying to learn how this all works. Any advice would be greatly appreciated. … iy-wedding

    1. KiaKitori profile image79
      KiaKitoriposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I like your subject, it is interesting and I think many brides to be will find it useful.
      Here is my opinion:
      You may want to add more text to the first capsule to fill up a the blank space in between the first and the second text capsule.
      You can also move the photo to the next capsule then the vlank space won't show.
      You can also add another picture. And a last piece of advice is to breake your longer paragraphs into shorter ones.
      Good luck.

  2. MelissaBarrett profile image59
    MelissaBarrettposted 5 years ago

    At some point, probably in the first sentence or so, you should  spell out "Do it yourself" then put (DIY) in parenthesis.  You can use DIY after that, but most acronyms should be explained before used....