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A diferent game / Activity -- A Tip on other peoples hubs

  1. freecampingaussie profile image51
    freecampingaussieposted 5 years ago

    We enjoy reccommend another hubbers hub, however how about a friendly tip ,advice  for the persons hub above you .

    For example    http://jlynnfowler.hubpages.com/hub/Inc … n-Children

    by Jlynnfowler a new hubber, I enjoyed reading your hub, however it would be great to have some photos included to enhance the hub.

    http://s3.hubimg.com/u/5345302_f248.jpg

  2. melbel profile image93
    melbelposted 5 years ago

    Okay, this sounds fun. I'm going to check out your lowest scored hub since it'll probably be difficult for me to find something wrong with your highest scoring one. tongue

    First off, for some reason, your ads aren't showing on your hubs, just something I noticed aside from critiquing your hubs. tongue

    Okay your hub: http://freecampingaussie.hubpages.com/h … ne-to-Join

    It appears to be kind of short. I don't know anything about travel clubs. Perhaps give some benefits to joining a travel club and what makes up a "good" travel club. What are some things that make up a bad one? How do travel clubs save people money? Do they cost money to join?

    1. annmackiemiller profile image85
      annmackiemillerposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      can I add in something? - it reads 'It is $9995 for a family lifetime membership with aprox $8500 worth of benefits for you to enjoy!'  is that right?  are you paying out more than the value of the benefits you enjoy?  Just wondering.

      1. freecampingaussie profile image51
        freecampingaussieposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks for tips, You will recieve $8,500 worth of benefits as well as saving up to $1000 a time on resort stays , cruises + discounts on car hire etc so over a lifetime you could save over $100,000 as a family or more

  3. annmackiemiller profile image85
    annmackiemillerposted 5 years ago

    @ Melbel - well it doesn't look to me as if you need any help from someone like me but I'm game... :0)

    http://melbel.hubpages.com/hub/-How-to- … d-Research

    I picked that one just cos it was your lowest rating.
    As a personal observation only - for someone like myself who needs help in this direction - I thought it was a bit too technical and a tad confusing. Maybe you need to separate what is a niche from the keyword search - I assume most searchers for this title would be like me - pig ignorant and need it spelt out in plain language.  but that is only my own very personal opinion. For folks with a bit of know-how it is excellent.
    Annie

    1. classicalgeek profile image87
      classicalgeekposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I did the lowest-rated one of yours:
      http://annmackiemiller.hubpages.com/hub … piced-Buns

      I liked it but I would add several things:
      1) how does the lack of sugar affect the baking? Why don't these buns have baking powder?
      2) About the sultanas: if all you have is dried-out sultanas, mentioning macerating might help.
      3) Suggestions for alternate spices if you don't have what the recipe recommends.

      HTH!

      1. annmackiemiller profile image85
        annmackiemillerposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        thanks these are great pointers.

  4. freecampingaussie profile image51
    freecampingaussieposted 5 years ago

    I enjoyed looking at your hubs Classicalgeek

    http://classicalgeek.hubpages.com/hub/h … -tea-maker 

    With this one I thought it might add to it if you had photos of you making the tea - add to an already good hub !

 
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