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My very short story!

  1. Nspeel profile image79
    Nspeelposted 5 years ago

    I have been writing for some time now. I just decided to really writing stories about real life situations. This one being the first I wanted you all to give me as much negative feedback as possible on it. Thank you
    http://nspeel.hubpages.com/hub/Aweful-Car-Wreck

  2. paradigmsearch profile image89
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    "The article you are looking for is no longer published. The author may have chosen to unpublish it, or it may have been unpublished by a moderater because of a violation of HubPages rules."

  3. paradigmsearch profile image89
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    I'm guessing that he included pics... smile

    1. Nspeel profile image79
      Nspeelposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      All pics are mine I wanted to toss it u before I published it... that is not possible?

  4. paradigmsearch profile image89
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    You have to publish it before we can see it.

    As to the pics, HP has a too-goriness tripwire; though I'm not sure where it is. smile

  5. Nspeel profile image79
    Nspeelposted 5 years ago

    Published you can view it now I apologize.

  6. paradigmsearch profile image89
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    The article seems fine to me.

    I'd probably work “Dog” into the title somehow. smile

  7. Nspeel profile image79
    Nspeelposted 5 years ago

    For SEO?

    1. paradigmsearch profile image89
      paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Yes.

 
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