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Your Critique

  1. IntroduceCroatia profile image60
    IntroduceCroatiaposted 5 years ago

    I just wanted to ask you if you can read a few of my hubs and tell me how to improve them.

    1. kschang profile image88
      kschangposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      My first reaction is... where's the map capsule? When you're talking about a geographical location, a map capsule is virtually REQUIRED, esp. in modern age when geography ain't one of our strong suits. big_smile

      Photos are quite good.

      I noticed you did not group the tourism hubs.

      You should also create a "meta hub", which should be titled "Tourism in Croatia" or something like that, and then links to each of your tourism hubs. In the meta hub, explain what Croatia is like, give a little history, why people should visit compared to other places in Europe, and so on. Even a proposed itinerary for a 3-7 day trip is a possibility.

      1. Joe Macho profile image93
        Joe Machoposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        I really like the suggestion made by kschlang to add an itinerary for a trip. It would at least give people a sense of what it would be like. Overall, your hubs  look good and definitely have beautiful pictures.

  2. IntroduceCroatia profile image60
    IntroduceCroatiaposted 5 years ago

    Thanks for your honest reviews. I will improve them :-)

 
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