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Sometimes when I open a door there is nothing on the other side.

  1. paradigmsearch profile image85
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    So what in the heck do I write after my current last line!?! smile
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    http://paradigmsearch.hubpages.com/hub/ … other-side

    1. SimeyC profile image90
      SimeyCposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      ...and so I enter......expecting the worst but hoping for more...

      something like that...

      1. paradigmsearch profile image85
        paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        That's a start. smile

        For now, I've changed the category to physics and gave it an awesome link.

        This is my first hub that has absolutely zero SEO. I can hardly wait... smile

      2. manlypoetryman profile image67
        manlypoetrymanposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Sounds like a really great couple of lines to a thought-provoking poem:

        I went ahead...because I had nothing left from where I had been.

        1. paradigmsearch profile image85
          paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          I like that. The thought of going the poetry route did indeed cross my mind and is a definite possibility. smile

  2. paradigmsearch profile image85
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    Amazing! I've actually come up with more text. But I have absolutely no idea where this critter is going. lol

    1. Disturbia profile image61
      Disturbiaposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Nowhere, it's going nowhere... 
      There is nowhere to go
      There is nothing on the other side of the door
      The vast and empty space, vacant and vacuous
      It draws you
      Entreats you
      Come, cross over the threshold
      Step into the nothingness
      Become one with eternity

      1. paradigmsearch profile image85
        paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Awesome! smile smile smile

      2. manlypoetryman profile image67
        manlypoetrymanposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Well done!

  3. paradigmsearch profile image85
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    I've decided that I'm going to leave the poetry to the pros! smile

  4. paradigmsearch profile image85
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    I have just written some more brilliant prose myself. However, I think I've finally written myself into a corner.  Help! lol smile

  5. 2uesday profile image85
    2uesdayposted 5 years ago

    Is the corner situated anywhere near the door? smile

    1. paradigmsearch profile image85
      paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Very, very excellent. That's the way I'm headed. Now I just have to figure out if I leave this hub in Physics or boot it back to Philosophy.

    2. paradigmsearch profile image85
      paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      btw, you are a keeper. smile smile smile

  6. paradigmsearch profile image85
    paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago

    DONE!

    Now I really do wonder which category is best??? hmm

  7. princess g profile image60
    princess gposted 5 years ago

    It was short, yes, and I'm not really sure what it was about. But it caught my attention, and I really liked this hub.

    1. paradigmsearch profile image85
      paradigmsearchposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      That hub was one heck of a lot of fun. Too bad it will never see the google light-of-day. Oh, well...

    2. princess g profile image60
      princess gposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I know how you feel. My favorite ones will never get any google love either.

      1. Jonathan Janco profile image74
        Jonathan Jancoposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Join the club!
        lol

 
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