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My first peom ever.

  1. cmlindblom profile image80
    cmlindblomposted 5 years ago

    Ive never writen one before and out of the blue wanted to write one. Let me know what you think.

    http://cmlindblom.hubpages.com/hub/Hes-Down

    1. princess g profile image60
      princess gposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Very emotional.very sad

    2. sassyk73 profile image80
      sassyk73posted 5 years ago in reply to this

      What a very true poem. My husband is a vet and suffers from P.T.S.D. because of war. Just terrifying.

  2. Cagsil profile image60
    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    It's a bit short and too many spelling errors.

  3. cmlindblom profile image80
    cmlindblomposted 5 years ago

    I went in and revised it again so it is not all correct. thanks for letting me know

  4. cmlindblom profile image80
    cmlindblomposted 5 years ago

    Anyone know a good straight poetry site? for posting poetry that is?

 
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