trust in ourselves

  1. SanLaro profile image77
    SanLaroposted 5 years ago

    Hello fellow hubbers. I am not quite sure what happens here but I have written a new hub and would like your feedback before it is published

    1. SanLaro profile image77
      SanLaroposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you Cagsil for being the only one to come to my rescue. I will take note of your comments and use them to improve my hubs. I will also look u up and check out your writings.

  2. Cagsil profile image59
    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    Welcome to Hubpages and to the Extreme Hub Makeover Forum thread. smile

    However, I would like to point out that other hubbers cannot review any hub that is unpublished. We can only review hubs that are published.

    This hub has good length, but you could use more text capsules and put the pictures/photos along side.

    http://sanlaro.hubpages.com/hub/God-is-all-that-is-good

    I'm not going to get into what you wrote.

    The below hub seems to have a decent length, but your formatting could use work. Play with the capsules, learn how to move them around.

    http://sanlaro.hubpages.com/hub/Peacewithin

    Again, I'm not going to get into your content.

    The below hus is way too short in content. So you will need to expand it. Again, work with the capsules, by moving them around to get a feel for formatting future hubs.

    http://sanlaro.hubpages.com/hub/How-do- … od-spirits

    Again, I'm not going to get into your content.

    However, I would suggest you visit the Learning Center. It can be helpful.

    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

 
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