Looking for feedback on technical hub.

  1. BradyBones profile image89
    BradyBonesposted 5 years ago

    Hey guys and gals!

    I've been with HubPages for three years now, but I haven't published very much here and I'm still learning the ropes. Could you possibly take a few moments and look over the structure of my latest hub and offer feedback?

    Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

    http://bradybones.hubpages.com/hub/CHFI … tudy-Guide

    1. wilderness profile image95
      wildernessposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I am completely ignorant of the subject, but the hub could use a little help.

      Break it up into more text capsules.  This will allow you to place the amazon capsules better, and leave room at the top right for that big google ad.

      Do you have 2 amazon links for the same book?  Looks the same to me...

      That's quite a disclaimer, and to me it detracts from the hub.  Can you shorten and simplify it?

      A photo or two would be nice if you can come up with one and work it in without making the left side one big, narrow column of text.

      Overall, not bad for a first hub.

      1. BradyBones profile image89
        BradyBonesposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you, wilderness, for your suggestions. I've taken them under advisement and have modified the Hub a bit.

        I really do appreciate you taking a look and giving me suggestions. I'm really getting rather excited about becoming much more active in the HubPages community.